Berman,+Jordan

Jordan Berman 1-28-11 l.a.l writing prompt Similar to Cass the main character of "Courage at Indean Deep" he feels angry just like the time I had to write 50 sentences in L.A.L class. Cass and I feel the same way because we were both angry and frustrated.

3-1-11 l.a.l 1.meager 2. baubles 3.contempt 4.saunter 5.desolation 1. The meager customer waited in the r estaurant over an hour for his meal. 2. The shiny baubles clung togther on the christmas tree. 3. The class was in contemp when the teacher yelled at Cass. 4. Josh sauntered while waiting for the bus. 5.Cass was in desolation when he first arrvied in north shore. __**Could be better; this is a 75.**__
 * used incorrectly**
 * christmas needs a capital**
 * contemp spelled wrong; cannot be in contemp, it's something you feel**
 * good**
 * cannot be in desolation, arrvied should be arrived; north shore needs capitals**

Jordan Berman **GOOD JOB!** 3-2-11 Name: __Jordan Berman__ Period: 2/3 Topic: __Wilderness Survival Guide/Technology KWL Chart__ [about this Idea or Question] ||  What I Want to Know… [about this Idea or Question] ||  What I Need to Find Out – Post in your notes and sources || 2. A log hut. || Lake superior is a great lake. || Will I be able to find shelter? Yes caves and a log hut. || · Find location of caves. · Find fallen branches/leaves for shelter. || 4. Berrys. || There are multiple animals there. || Will I be able to find berrys and fruits? Yes. || · Find eatable berries. · Find eatable fruits. || 6. Stream water || There are different kinds of trees there. || Is the water clean? Stream water is. || · Find where streams are located. · Find fresh water streams. || 8. fire || There is drift wood for fire there. || Could I find matches? If I bring matches. || · Find drift wood. · Find fallen trees to be lit. || 10. Follow a path. || There are cabins in north shore. || Will people help me? Most likely. || · Find people. · Find civilization. ||
 * Main Ideas or Questions you have about survival in the North shore Wilderness (one in each box) ||  What I Already Know …
 * 1. What kind of shelter can I make?
 * 3. What kind of food will I eat?
 * 5. What kind of water will I drink?
 * 7. What kind of heat will I have?
 * 9. How will I find civilization?

Jordan Berman 3-9-11 sentences Your - Look at your car. Their - Their new cat is gray. There - The new resturant is over there. Too - My little brother is coming to the movies too. Knew - I knew about the 1700's when Mrs.Magee gave us the test.
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 * needs a comma after movies**
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 * 3/10/11 - 96**
 * Jordan Berman**
 * 3-10-11**
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 * survival paragph**
 * If i was stranded in the wilderness alone I would need food, water, shelter, and heat to survive. I would get food by hunting animals and cooking them on a fire. I would get water from a stream. I would make shelter with wood and vines. i would also use the fire for heat.**
 * Survival guide final project**
 * 3-10-11**
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