Diaz,+Robert

1.Meager-My mom was very meager to get me outside. 2.Baubles.- **not done** 3.contempt- I asked my mom if i could go to the movies and she said "NO"! I stared at her with contempt. 4.saunter- When im bored I usually walk outside and saunter. 5.Desolation- **not done**
 * used incorrectly**
 * i should be I; said needs a comma**
 * im should be I'm; after saunter you need around**
 * 3/3 - This should be much better; in addition, two were not done. This is a 50.**



Robert diaz 2/3 March 9, 2011 Stop messing with me your being a pest. I cant take it anymore so go over their. I made magic see there. Did you you get that new call of duty game "yeah" "Me too". I knew that you were the one who stole my brand new piano.
 * this is a run on sentence; incorrect use of your**
 * cant should be can't; comma after anymore; wrong use of their**
 * not a sentence**
 * call of duty needs caps; rest of sentence makes no sense**
 * good**
 * 8x4=32 68**
 * If i had to be stranded in a wilderness i would use sticks and tinder for fire a shirt or leaves for warmth or make a hut with logs and other matirial and a log for a wepon and kill**
 * fish for food.**

March 23, 2011 three ways i would persuase my mom and dad is i wouls say the elephent is big fun loving and good for a pary and ive been dieing to have one its good for partys,and eats penuts, and is big. three reason my parents wouldnt want is Its big,Dirty,And will break everything.media type="file" key="Zeb robert Fredward.wmv"