Miller,+Marcel

In the story Courage at Idian Deep Cass had a attitude when he had to move. This remined me when i got a attiude when a teacher was yelling at me.

Marcel Miller Period 2/3 March 9, 2011 Sentences 1. Your shoes are very cool. 2. The toys are thier's i said to my little brother. 3. We went to 6 flags and there was a hotdog stand. 4. I told my friend i was going to the movies and he said me too. 5. Are group knew more question then the other groups.
 * good**
 * incorrect use of their; i should be I**
 * 6 should be Six**
 * i should be I; comma after me**
 * Are should be Our; question should be questions; then should be than**
 * 8x4= 32 Your grade is a 68**

WHat do you think you would need to Survive if you were stranded in the wilderness alone? If i was Stranded in the wilderness I would get a sharpe stick, I would try to find a cave. I need a fire, I would get a log a leaf and I would sit on the Log and a leaf to gather water in and boil it with the fire to have clean water.

Pros for adotpting 1. It will be a good pet and i could rid it to school. 2. It can protect me if someone try to rob or hurt me. 3. It can be my best friend i will get out the house more to play with it.

Cons for Not adopting an elephant. 1. It will take to much room. 2. It will leave to many dropings. 3. It will get to big to have or It will be to much money to spend on it.

Pros for adotpting 1. It will be a good pet and i could rid it to school. 2. It can protect me if someone try to rob or hurt me. 3. It can be my best friend i will get out the house more to play with it.

Cons for Not adopting an elephant. 1. It will take to much room. 2. It will leave to many dropings. 3. It will get to big to have or It will be to much money to spend on it.

Pros for adotpting 1. It will be a good pet and i could rid it to school. 2. It can protect me if someone try to rob or hurt me. 3. It can be my best friend i will get out the house more to play with it.

Cons for Not adopting an elephant. 1. It will take to much room. 2. It will leave to many dropings. 3. It will get to big to have or It will be to much money to spend on it.