McArthur,+Frederick

Frederick McArthur March 9,2011 Period 2/3

1. Do **your** homework in the kicthen Tommy!
 * kicthen should be kitchen; comma after kitchen**

2. Give **their** basketball back to the kids.
 * good**

3. Go over **there** and count to 30.
 * good**

4. Hey, I got one of those skates **too**.
 * comma after skates**

5. I **knew** that you would get this gift for me.Your the best father in the world!
 * Your should be You're**
 * 4x4=16 Your grade is an 84 Good job!**

Frederick McArthur March 10.2011 Period 2/3 Journal Entry

I think that I would need to survive water, food, shelter, and some weapons to survive. I need shelter like a cabin or a tent. I would stay in the sun so I could be energized, awake, and healthy.

Frederick McArthur March 10,2011 Period 2/3 Journal Entry

Pros for adopting an elephant: Cons
 * 1) It wakes you up in the morning like an alarm clock.
 * 2) it comes with a cage.
 * 3) He spray fresh water for showers, tubs, pools, and other stuff.
 * 1) Its very loud.
 * 2) He eats alot of food
 * 3) Knocks stuff down.