Allmond,+Teea

media type="custom" key="8956564"Teea Allmond January 28,2011 LAL 6 Mrs.Fleming/Mrs.Stard

In the story __Courage At Indian Deep B__y Jane Resh Thomas.(FR) I can relate to Cass in many ways from his attuide __, to his dissapointment__, I relate to Cass alot. __When ever__ I move place to place from Sommers Point to Atantic City To Mays Landing I had this one best friend; I really did not know her that well (RO) we were just little kids. There was a boy that was in a grade higher then me that was bullying me about my teeth. I soon __had__ found out later that he liked me; I did not care. I was very disapointed [when I moved that] I did not have my friends with me. When __i__ have a attuide You can call me the bad side of Cass.because I get the __badest__ (SP) attuide you will ever see.


 * Re-type with my corrections, Teea. Things underlined generally need to be deleated, spelling errors corrected, and things in parenthesis need to be added.**
 * Mrs. Fleming**

March 1,2011 1.I was meager to lay down after cheerleading. 2.My mom puts baubles all around our tree for chrismas. 3.The whole class looked at Mrs.Stard with contempt. 4.I saunter to my bad room after my dance class. 5.Destolation Vocab sentences 1.When I went to school Krista told me __your__ so pretty. 2.__Their__ were way to many kid at breakfest this morning. 3.One my birthday I had put on a dress and my family had said with amazment __there__ she is. 4.When I go to the park my sister always says can i come __too__. 5.I __knew__ somthing was fishy when Brandon started to wisper.
 * used incorrectly**
 * chrismas should be Christmas**
 * good(?)**
 * bad room should be bedroom**
 * not done**
 * This assignment was scored a 75.**
 * March 9,2011**
 * incorrect your**
 * incorrect use of their**
 * One should be On; delete both had**
 * comma after park; i should be I**
 * wisper should be whisper**
 * 3/10/11 - 7x4=28 Your grade is a 72.**
 * March 10,2011**
 * If I was stranded I would need ,to surive in the wilderness alone.I would need a bowl of leaves to make a a bowl i would put water in the bowl to make a girl like my friend taught me from girl scouts to help me when i need to make a fire and id find the grains and meats of the wildlife such as plants and other grains .Thats what i would need.**
 * March 17,2011**
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