Fisher,+Yameera


 * 3/24/11 - Yameera, this is good; however, I have a few suggestions. Numbers 2 and 3 are really the same; you need to change one of them. Although you may want to know what makes and lake a lake it has nothing to do with surviving in the wilderness; you need to change that one also. Nicely done, though. **

Name: Yameera Fisher Period: 2-3 Topic: __Wilderness Survival Guide/Technology KWL Chart__ [about this Idea or Question] ||  What I Want to Know… [about this Idea or Question] ||  What I Need to Find Out – Post in your notes and sources || · It got a lot of snow this winter. || · How many inches does it snow a year ? · Do they have floods ? || · It snows 170 inches (432 cm) a year. −60 °F (−51 °C) · They do have floods .They have annual Floods. · It Rains Too. a lot. || · Needs to be purified. || · Has a rocky shore line. || · A little not a lot. || · Fish · Birds ||  · Do the animals that live near the lake, depend on the lake ? · How big are the moose ? || · Conifer-dependent birds, wolves, · pine martens, · fishers, · black bears, moose, and a host of other animals roam || · Lakes can be big or flat · Lakes can be polluted. · They do a lot of business on the lake. || · How do they get from lake to lake ? · How did lake superior get there · Climate ? · What states border the lake ||  · It’s a body of water with land around it. || Yameera Fisher Fleming | Stard Quiz March 9, 2011
 * Main Ideas or Questions you have about survival in the Canadian Wilderness (one in each box) ||  What I Already Know …
 * 1. How much does it snow or rain **in the northern wilderness**? || · It snows a lot
 * 2. Is the water in lake superior drinkable ? || · Its water .  ||  · Is it good to drink ?  ||  · No its a little contaiminated.
 * 3. Is Lake Superior contaminated? || · Its big .  ||  · Next to the other great lakes.
 * 4. What kind of animals are in the area (lake)? || · Moose
 * 5. What Makes a lake a lake ? || · Can be fresh or salty

1. " Chanese, I like __your__ sneakers " I said. 2. The family left __their__ item that they bought at Shoprite. 3. " Look at my shoe right there ! " I yelled at my sister. 4. " I like the Beach In San Juan, Puerto Rico " Selbbep Said " Me __too__ ! " Yameera agreed. 5. " What's 5 times 6 plus 8 minus 2 ? " Marcell asked " Thirty- two " Zeb Said. " No ! thirty-six " Marcell replied " Oh i __knew__ That " he akwardly said.
 * comma after sneakers but before quotes**
 * good**
 * good**
 * beach does not get a capital; comma after Rico; said gets lower case and then period**
 * period after asked; comma after two but before quotes; said lower case; comma after six but before quotes; period after replied;**
 * comma after of; cap on i that needs lower case**

Yameera Fisher Fleming | Stard Journal entry " What do you think you would need to surivive if you were stranded in the wilderness alone ? " march 10, 2011 If i were stranded in the wilderness alone, And in order to surivive i would need some things; such as food, water, shelter, And the use of fire. I would need these things because with out food and water i would dehedrate and starve. I'd need some type of shelter, So ican sleep and ican stay when its bad wheather outside. I really need fire to keep warmth, to cook the food i get, and to give me light at night. Those are the things i would need to survive in the wild.
 * 11x4=44 56 is your grade:(**

Jordan Berman, Krista Panas, Yameera Fisher. P.B.L Advertising Per.4/5

1 - Patriotism OK 2 – Testimonial OK  3 – Facts and Figures OK  4 – Snob Appeal \ Glittering Generalities OK  5 – Facts And Figures X  6 – Bandwagon OK  7 – Wit and humor OK  8 – facts and figures OK  9 – Snop appeal OK  10 – Glittering generalities OK  11 - testimonial OK  12 – Patriotism OK

1 wrong out of 12 = 92