Garcia,+Giomar

In the novel **__Courage At Indian Deep__** By Jane Resh Thomas. I know how it feels to move to an unfamiliar place because i've to have done this... But i didn't quite act like this well because i was 6 years old! I also felt the pain just think about it... losing all your friends to get new one that will probably take months maybe years!!!So this is how i can relate to this.


 * 1) **3/3/11 - There are many mistakes in this paragraph. If you had made the changes during conferencing you paper wuld have been much higher. It is a 3 out of 6.**


 * 3/2/11 - re-type paragraph with corrections: not done**
 * **put the following words into sentences: __meager, saunter, desolation,baubles and contempt__**
 * **__KWL not posted__** anywhere

1. Wait who are you? __your__ not in this class. 2. I found toys, does this mean __their__ mines? No __their__ his toys. 3. __There__ are 10 cows in that barn. 4. We are going to the mall, “Can I go __too__”? 5. I __knew__ I should of picked that as my answer.
 * your needs a capital and should be You're **
 * , should be ; their should be they're; mines should be mine; comma after no; their should be they're **
 * good **
 * comma should be a period; comma after go; question mark inside quotes **
 * of should be have **
 * 11x4=44 grade is 56 **